IceAxe vs bodaciousent [IA 3-0]

[Tash8]

IceAxe takes in all cats

Im sorry, but for a rap battler you suck. And dont give us that im better and win every battle blah blah blah bullshit. Writing gives you time, freestyle batt;ing doesnt, if anything your punchlines should have been better.

agreed, stop making excusing... all i've heard from you is excuses,

oh i'm a better battler in real live battles
oh this song sucks because it's using a laptop

not discourging u or anything but excuses will never get u anywhere.

[bodaciousent]

IceAxe takes in all cats

Im sorry, but for a rap battler you suck. And dont give us that im better and win every battle blah blah blah bullshit. Writing gives you time, freestyle batt;ing doesnt, if anything your punchlines should have been better.

agreed, stop making excusing... all i've heard from you is excuses,

oh i'm a better battler in real live battles
oh this song sucks because it's using a laptop

not discourging u or anything but excuses will never get u anywhere.

I don't need you to tell me I suck because I got top doggs telling me im good then some person on the internet I don't even know. I don't even know if your male or female lmao.

[Tash8]

then you must be real retarded, cause it says it right under my profile pic

Gender: Male.

seriously stop talking, ur making urself sound stupid..

ur like the second coming of kojack.

[Doe Ray Me]

IceAxe takes in all cats

Im sorry, but for a rap battler you suck. And dont give us that im better and win every battle blah blah blah bullshit. Writing gives you time, freestyle batt;ing doesnt, if anything your punchlines should have been better.

agreed, stop making excusing... all i've heard from you is excuses,

oh i'm a better battler in real live battles
oh this song sucks because it's using a laptop

not discourging u or anything but excuses will never get u anywhere.

I don't need you to tell me I suck because I got top doggs telling me im good then some person on the internet I don't even know. I don't even know if your male or female lmao.

look on the right side, under Gender, pretty much gives it away

and btw i went to your myspace, and your not that good, just you talking over a beat, no flow at all

[BabyBLue91]

it might not be my spot to come in n talk.. but i will anyway
bodaciousent, it just seems like u need to learn how to take criticism..
ppl on here honestly do not give a fuck, so they'll be blunt about everythin n tell u how it is.. cuz if i was tryin to be a rapper, or anythin for that matter.. id take advice/criticism from ppl i dont even kno just cuz they aint afraid to tell u tha truth, rather than ppl that are ur friends tryin to sugarcoat everything ya kno? anyway im sure that'll help u improve..

take it or leave it

+ if ur gonna post on here.. ur leavin it out so ppl can see n judge ur work, so dont be too surprised that someone "you dont kno" is givin u advice that u might take offensively


(not tryin to be rude)

[shady4life!]

now adays u just cant find a simple good clean battle can u .... i hate to say it bodaciousent but i thin the other fellas r right about some things just that the way they approach it is very childish and irritatin. Anyway enuff sugar coatin, i think u need a lot of practice too and need to focus on more complex rhymes. U listen to eminem probably as much as i do and u memorise his lyrics too so u probably know wat im talkin about when i say ur rhymes r too simple. When u rap u gotta change ur voice tone aswell and not just rap at one single tone, there is no variation and it sounds like ur listenin to the same second of the song over an over again, and it gets real borin...(kinda like that Man Down song ewww) but anyway keep at it and if u take all our advice im sure u can learn a thing or two and become a better rapper than u already are.

Anyway i dont know how to categorise this battle... the two freestyles were at completely different levels and styles so its hard to compare but i wud say iceaxe won

Flow Bodaciousent
Structure Bodaciaosent
Rhymes Ice Axe
Multies Ice Axe
Complexity Ice Axe
Others Ice Axe

Ice axe wins 4-2

BATTLE CLOSED

[IceAxe]

it was over a while ago, but thanks anyway

[shady4life!]

it was over a while ago, but thanks anyway

its not over until the until u get a KO or get 5 votes first.... those r the rules.... u cant just stop a battle votin in the middle just becuz u think everyone is in favour of ur diss? Thats so unnofficial, u havent won shit and it shit will be recourded until u hav won the battle the proper way it is supposed to .

Ayo and u people better start votin more on other peoples battles aswell, this system will never work and will continue to be a failure if u people just skim thru other peoples battles and completely ignore them.

[IceAxe]

I got my third vote, and the KO, on the first page.

[shady4life!]

I got my third vote, and the KO, on the first page.

I personally did not count McMaybe's vote becuz he did not categorize anythin at all and thats not fair in a battle to do that, even if u think u shud win and the person is right.

Plzzz if u want to vote then be fair and do it properly with all the categories and also maybe with some justification behind ur votes so we know its official instead of just sayin this person wins. Its a lot more better that way .

[Enimee]

i dont see why "categorizing" is a fair way of voting jus cuz someone does better in catz dosnt mean they didnt leave an effect that would make the reader think they won?

[shady4life!]

i dont see why "categorizing" is a fair way of voting jus cuz someone does better in catz dosnt mean they didnt leave an effect that would make the reader think they won?

Must u contridict everything i say? Those r the rules chump so y the fuck r u arguin or r u just dyin to pick beef with me. How wud u like if people came onto our battle and all just voted for me without explainin y? I wudnt consider that completely as fair even if they honestly thot i was better. When u categorize things u break the battle down and show which parts of it were done better than the oppenents, so people wud know exactly how they won/lost. I wud expect u to know that Eminmee since ur such a good rapper.

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Ice Axe Wins 3-0 (props on remebering to change the title)

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