random rap i wrote. check it!

[soperman005]

i snort cocaine just to warp my brain
ignore my pain wit drugs, i dont wanna mourn today
a horrible way to cope but i warn you mayne
you gonna pop you better eat an orange for taste
an a less boring day youll have
ur high as shit, yeah! now do the math
ima set a booby trap, just to fuel my wrath
i spew my rap, and i only spit the truth and fact
let me let you know that i rep the grove
got the eg flow wit some extra coke
i guess you know that im a fucking boss
ill bust one off, get my id and cut the rock
i tear people apart wit a real sharp
steamin' fart that'll prolly leave a scar

[city]

yo that was hott son. props

[Requiem]

nice flow

[Steve Spag]

The flow was a little off in some parts the way I read it, but it was good. I liked the rhyme scheme for it and how you just went off, lol. Good stuff, check my "Poetry's Finest" and let me know what you think.

[lostdaze18]

I really liked it and i think it had a good flow