I admit...

[Ka0t1c]

I admit I wanted to forfeit
when I didnt have a positive outlet

of hints I was dumb founded
so I wandered 'round helpless

and it kept causin me conflicts
cuz problems had suddenly hit

and at the bottom I got caught in a twist
my body began to flip the following script

which brought to an end my assumptions
I quit pretending to function unequipt

cuz without the wisdom I'm nothin
yet all my friends weren't in conjunction

as I left my prison like dungeon
but I had to rid the corruption

for my vision's construction
to quickly get launchin

my intent's to hault the pridictin: false judgment
and cement in rock solid what I picture to publish

a gift God did promise now I'll print it well polished
and lift me up from the pit cuz punishment shouldn't touch talent

I am sent here to comment of why I exist by sharin my content
across my checklist to seven continents I've got to visit before I am spent

but I'll talk to just six 'til I slip off my akward axis
my odd thoughts n lyrics are boxed in abundance

until no other option presents in my conscience
I'll offer my audience often the opposite of obvious

in concerts the author Kaotic
unbound to limits

you oughtta not bother to spit or challenge I hint to uncover within
cuz you'd prolly be pissed 'bout my powerful wits

[Steve Spag]

Really good read. Don't think you were really concentrating on flow for that one the way it sounds to me, but the vocab. is deffinetly great. Kept my attention the whole time through and I thought it was a nice peice of work . Keep it up, and if you could please comment my newest shit and let me know what you think inside of "Poetry's Finest", it's updated with new stuff at the bottom.

[Rain Matrix]

lyrical cous da gras - damn good drop