Vettori Vs Rain Matrix

[Vettori]

I guess ill drop first cause i asked for someone too battle...this took me a few minutes..I didnt expect to be battlin rain so i hope for a good battle bro, seen what yu can do

do ya best I did

Umm voting goes as normal break it down i guess...and win or lose...Doesnt matter to me

Im almost done here few more bars

[Vettori]

Just cause it says im your friend on the internet
Doesnt mean i am, Your now witnissin What it really meant
Rains not seen if you Place it in dark, I'll take it to heart
Rape at no charge ima make it take a long time for a fake to unthaw
A Livin Star here chitterin Heres my mittens and scarf
Cause what im sayins so cold, I watch it chip you apart
Victim of Sars now smutherin Seepin threw time
Caughin and sneezin no technique so im Teachin you mine
Leave in your Mind an empty space, watch it Seizure inside
so your flow goes epeleptic Gets between and devides
im the last thing in ur face like a 1 on one fight
Like the last thing that ur girls says when she knows that shes right
A fuckin Bomb so small But over time it expands
Finding the plans to fight back but realize that you cant
The jokes over advancements what i see You will never
Dont ever think your more clever, What ive seen has torn retnas
a level out mellow down dude is when I exist
Then i get pissed all of sudden Now You wish that i didnt
Vicious as hell, While u aint sittin no more you throw Fits?
Who are you kiddin ? Like im gonna Miss a minute of This
You Just a quitter, Fiddlin the wrong Menace so sick
My stomach wishes you rather hit it, then hearin your shit
Earings that fit, wish they didnt cause you Lack of there shine
wackier rhymes Thats your fault 4 lettin me back in your mind

Best i could do atm....Best of luck to ya

I felt i came out pretty strong, for the first battle in three years haha :P

anyway Peopl can judge after Rain Drops

Respect for battlin to man

[Rain Matrix]

say goodbye to yur Misery Mister Flee before yur a Mystery
u Had No Shield on tha Battlefield my Victory is v's History
Kid Yor Never going to Live Forever what u think [V A Mpire]
I beat Them Easy like Em's CD's they suck so I Re Up N Fire
u run through ya Thoughts Hard but u come across with Stock Bars
try to make tha cut ya Not Par so go home and party like a Popstar
why are u Smiling to score u play [Violin] another Psychos Cause
so I just Might Go Off tearing this pussy up like it's Microsoft
u couldn't ever Merc Apart my Work Of Art I sculpture Foes Ta Losing
u've been Out Classed I'll hit ya House Fast like Cultural Diffusion
as I See Fakeness I ready a Replacement yur a Bit Fucked
this isn't Nip Tuck like old carpets u'll get Ripped Up
my hits will Dent Ya Chin and eventually End Tha Grin
altering bodies like Medicine cooking "v" like Venison
I'll stay on u like Moving Eyes so tha rhetoric yur Using Dies
Yur Response Is that u Were Concious but then quicky Euthanized
u were a Weakling's Seedling before tha diss could Begin
don't call me out Sleep In yur never Beefing like a Vegan
fading out in yur Dark Flows Dreams there really Are No Scenes
Plenty Cautious I take advantage of Empty Pockets like Cargo Jeans
I Rap For tha Facts More yur on a Crash Course so I Win Wreckless Ya See
yur not even With It cuz u couldn't Spit Sick with an Infectious Disease
u write Many Rhymes with an Empty Mind and u can't Redrop
at Anytime like tha destruction of VH1 I blow up V's Spot

* V A Mpire-/V A Empire/Vampire
* Violin-/Vile In

man u let me battle and do my text thing yur a winner in my book

[Vettori]

haha im impressed man, that was well worth the wait.. I had fun with it thats for sure

You went straight at me haha.. respect

Ok ppl VOTE !!! or die

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FLOW - hard guyz...i'll give it to vettori
STRUCTURE - tie
PUNCHES - matrix...
MULTIES - matrix
RHYMES - matrix
VOCAB - matrix
COMPLEXITY - vettori
NAMEPLAY - martix
OTHER- matrix...metaphers were crazy

vote goes to Rain Matrix
its closer than it looks...dope battle
enjoy readin keep it up guyz

[shady4life!]

Wow this is a long one very good u guys both of em seemed quite decent its gonna take me a while to break it down but im busy so i will do it later. But both were pretty good. My only critisism is that vettori cudda used more similes and more multis especially near the begginin. If ur making a long line, it shud either end with a hard punch or hav many multis or internal rhymes to keep the flow goin fast and movin smoothly. Rain wins on flow. But the rest i make an official vote later.

Good job u two

[Vettori]

haha So far im gettin my ass kicked haha...sall good, Ive never really used punchlines In my rhymes, im more of a storytell rapper lol.. But i guess thats sumthin i should practice doin a lil more...specially for battles..This battle definatly helped out my flow tho ... Main thing i hope the readers enjoy it

[Enimee]

FLOW - V
STRUCTURE - V
PUNCHES - matrix
MULTIES - matrix
RHYMES - matrix
VOCAB - V
COMPLEXITY - vettori
NAMEPLAY - martix
OTHER- matrix...def way more personal;s nd shyt

matrix gets it 5-4 great GREAT GREAT battle better then frosted flakes shyt that was 2 hard it was close as shady4lifes eyes get to the tv when ggw comercials come on good shyt i want to see more of these long battles really get to show off some skill

[Vettori]

haha thnx man...I agree these kind of battles show what ppl are made of.. :P

anyway..Still gettin my ass handed to me lol...lets say first to three

So its 2-0 ....ur winnin man haha

[Arabian Shady]

so fukin hard, so freakin wiked man, best i've eva read!
okay


FLOW -tie
STRUCTURE -rain- much easire 2 read
PUNCHES - rain - personal shyt
MULTIES - rain,this guy is like a multi machine!
RHYMES - both
VOCAB - both,euthanised,epileptic,
COMPLEXITY -vettori
NAMEPLAY - vettori, rain: i didnt get the V remark man
OTHER-rain-mind bogglin multis

RAin wins-again,lol
but believe me man, this was amazing, best battle i've read,vettori ur rusted but u could kick ass man, practice sum more n u could fukin bitch slap ne 1
peace

[Vettori]

thx man for the votes..haha good battle rain..hope to get better..n battle yea again sometime...pce

[shady4life!]

ahh too late a KO!.... well its pointless votin now but i said i wud so her goes


FLOW - Rain wins his flow is more slick cuz of the more fluent rhymes and multies he used to make it move
STRUCTURE - Rain was strong from start and gave a better finish, but vettori did well buildin up his verse and makin it stronger towards the end but the beginin was still a bit weak, and very passive.
PUNCHES - Rain definitely, u cant win a battle vettori if u dont attack the opponent...
MULTIES - Rain nothing needed to be said
RHYMES - RAin nothing needed to be said
VOCAB - Rain got more higher vocab like Diffusion, Vension, Euthanized etc
COMPLEXITY - vettori yeah i think vettori's was deeper
NAMEPLAY - tie didnt see nun or any good ones
OTHER- tie both were quite good

7-3 Rain Wins

Nice drop people

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this battle is now closed no one else post after this post

rain matrix wins 3-0