DA SNAP BACK

[Arabian Shady]

As promised, another drop, dope or wack YOU decide
here goes

Now as i sit on ma desk, slowly waitin for rhymes
just wana link a few words, tryina make a few lines
Its trin ta connect the dots,this mind of mine
Am still sittin wid a blank, guess its takin its time
All tricks ta trick sink,they stink,they're shit
they fell ripped from a crap rapper wid a limpdick
Feel mentally sick,eyes focus now on the candle wick
Its tuff when rhymes hit u in english, urdu and evn arabic
A new plan to FEAT., so first find the beat
to match the heat on paper, somthing the fans greet
the mind tries ta cheat,takes the T.I.C beat
the same rhymes but just da words tweaked
But wait,its time ta snap back n attack
drop ma new shit, sans all the wack, you see
its just that,never failed to deliver bitch slaps
ta rappers,haters n fakers with such raps

NOTE: T.I.C: Till I Collapse
Urdu: da national language of pakistan

lol, i actually wrote in a very short while, i know the length of the rhymes is not same but wen i wrote on paper i felt so ,but didnt turns out like that
all I need is reviews man, a yes or not is fine wid me
or wateva makes ya happy
Peace

[Rain Matrix]

good drop tha explanations helped alot

[JMG]

no

[SajN]

It's a nice drop you got there
Simple rhymes, but cool.

PS: I can speak urdu

Can you feed mine too: Lot of thoughts.

[Arabian Shady]

rain:thnx for chekin it out, ur advice helps alot
JmG:thnx for chekin man, if possible hit me wid wat i shud improve on
Non stop:thnx brother, will check out ur drop as soon i i press submit
urdr?/ that actually surprised me!, where did u learn it, i did cause my skool had manu pakis in it so it helped in havin friends n agnst dicks who talked behind ma bak

peace


3 aint enuf ppl , more reviews!!!!!!

[SajN]

I am from Pakistan Thats why I can urdu.
But I was born, and still live in Norway.