Made for fun .. nothing more

[SajN]

The story is that my friend told me to do this. He said to me that had to use simple rhymes and try to write something funny (because I always write something serious) and it had to be bad. I tried and this is the result. It's not my style and I don't like this type.. But just check it.. Decided to share with you guys, cuz you all love me.. Don't you ?!

I wanna put down something on my sheet.
Suddenly there's something touching my feet.
I look down, and see a mouse.
Fuck, how did it come to my house?
I start to shout.
The mouse is tryin' to run away.
Oh no, it's not gonna happen today
The fuckin' rat got in its hole, think it's safe.
Hah, it just got a one-way ticket to the grave.
Come out little slut, I just want an autograph,
I am a fan..
The rat's coming to me
GODDAMN, the motherfucker just bit my hand.
I'mma kill you, you know I can.
Only if you don't get off me.
HEY, COME BACK. I JUST WANT TO CUT YOUR HEAD OFF G!
Why you runnin'? Don't you think death is funny?
Let me prove. Come to me so I can kill you.
Hey, you're making me angry.
I'mma kill you and your family.
Then you can see how funny it can be.
Argh. Okay just leave then.
All I wanted to was to be your friend!

[Steve Spag]

It was okay, obviously you've done a lot better before. However I did like the "The rat's coming to me
GODDAMN, the motherfucker just bit my hand." line. The way I read it, it sounded pretty funny, lol.

[SajN]

Yeah .. I know I've done better than that.. that just something my friend wanted me to do in like 10-15 minutes today at school.. So I just had to..

That line ispretty funne yeah

[Tash8]

weird concept

that line was good, you could base a joke song around it.

[SajN]

Yeah, it's weird.. I know.. haha lol ..

I am not going to do anything more with it, as I said, it's not my style..

[Enimee]

maybe if you werent bouncin around with ur ideas so much and it wasnt funny at all too me

[SajN]

maybe if you werent bouncin around with ur ideas so much

What do you mean by that ?
What ideas ?

[Enimee]

just your topic it was about a rat u didnt like right?> and u kept on sayin u was gonna kill it and stuff reminded me of eminems KIM lol no offence it was def effort i jus didnt get it was all

[SajN]

I wasn't thinking of "KIM" when I wrote it.. lol

This is nothing I wanted to be special, but I'll promise you: I am working on something right now, and it will be off the hook!

[Enimee]

can't wait bruv i am def in anticipation lol g/l

[Robbie G]

I liked it..unique concept.

[SajN]

Thank you

[Rain Matrix]

I liked it a true freestyle

u went with it and it was damn good

nice connective rhyming

[SajN]

Thank you Rain.
I wasn't thinking of putting so much energy in it.. as explained at the top ...