The Timeline of Tash

[Tash8]

i explode in fear when i hear my beats
the price is higher than spear's reciept
i'll do anything but i wont plead defeat
i'd rather just die or bleed in speed--o's
till the color's contrast from red to blue like the
ocean blue while i sit and listen to them beatles
jay say "mo' money mo' problems"
but I got no money and plenty whore problems
what worse can happen if dough just blossomed
well I could be dead. dead? blah
i'm already dead i'm justa ghost that said ahh
in the microphone, now i got ninety whores
laid up on my dick like al capon did in the 1920's
plenty years later, I was born and
the first thing i did was fuck the planet
till it got pregnanet and had 2 twins
one was the moon, and the other was saturn

[Steve Spag]

Had some pretty sick parts in there. I think it kinda fell off towards the end though to be honest. I really liked how it started though, and there were some pretty clever lines in there.

"jay say "mo' money mo' problems"
but I got no money and plenty whore problems"

That was my favourite part, something I relate to heavily, haha.

Keep it up

[Rain Matrix]

this was a good drop

nice directional rhyming tho flow was harder and harder to follow

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

"jay say "mo' money mo' problems"
but I got no money and plenty whore problems"

That was my favourite part, something I relate to heavily, haha.

and

this was a good drop

[SajN]

Nice drop ..

I liked the beginning, but I fell a bit off at the end..
But still its good
Couldn't follow the flow ..
Bt Keep it up..

[Tash8]

thanks guys

i'm guessing you said it fell at the end is because i didn't rhyme that much or something? lol

flow was pretty simple so follow i thought

[SajN]

True. It didn't rhyme that much at the end.
Flow is ok (thats my opinion lol )