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Crazy Practise wit Wordplay

Postby J Roc » Dec 5th, '07, 03:10

imma Post Some Ez Shit for practise

SOME DIE but im "HUNG DRY" like im in tha SUN HIGH
shit-its-not that u "spittin"-hot cuz its a "Wrap" like u TOUNGUE TIED!!
nah its ya DUMB PRIDE that left ya "body-splat" when tommy's-clap like GUM DRIED!!
tha Lead's-"braide" or ya Head-"Shaved" like CLIPS N RAZORS!! what you SPITTINS LAMER.
i clip-tha-nines that'll "Split-ya-sides" like you GIVIN LABOR!!
n keep tha "hatin-up" you "Racist-Fucks" like ya DICKS IN KRAMER!!!(Lmfao...Think!!)
TOMMYS BLOW THA PEICE. Spit-Stupid n Get-"Booted" Like ya POSSE KNOWS YA WEAK!!
u Fags-Suck. only thing Yall "Bagged-up" was ya MOMMYS GROCERIES!!

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Last edited by J Roc on Mar 16th, '08, 18:50, edited 5 times in total.
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Re: Crazy Practise wit Wordplay

Postby Robbie G » Dec 5th, '07, 03:31

I liked it pretty good for a quick practice. :boxing:
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Re: Crazy Practise wit Wordplay

Postby J Roc » Dec 5th, '07, 13:34

Thanks for tha feed Doe^^i added a few More Lines To Make It Longer
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Re: Crazy Practise wit Wordplay

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 5th, '07, 15:40

...magically appears...

yur definitly getting good at tha meta's

tha rhymes were decent but not overpowering

keep dropping um

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Re: Crazy Practise wit Wordplay

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 6th, '07, 05:50

Wow man that's fucking dope, lol. Really sick wordplay there, don't see that too often anymore, haha. Keep it up :y:
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Re: Crazy Practise wit Wordplay

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 7th, '07, 13:20

i liked it man, nice shit!
:y: peace
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