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Just In Case

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Just In Case

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 4th, '07, 18:06

pound for pound I'm like Weighed Grams tha fakes They Ran
knowing that I've Laid Plans eventually I'll be a Made Man

I'm getting my Hunger Back all of a sudden Tha Thunder Cracks
rain falls on tha Younger Acts yet another life is Under Wraps

death grip on tha Main Stream some yur friends start to Change Teams
it's like u woke up in a Strange Dream u don't know what tha Game Means

until u study tha Top Ten u see I'm white I can spit and I'm Not Em
there is no Stop Then I'll lay it on tha line failure isn't an Option

strong with my Pimp Hand feel tha Sting Land It'll Be At Ya Skull Dude
out to be my Own Boss lyrically taking Domes Off like a Retractable Roof

I always leave a Few Lines but alot of people View Rhymes Judgementally
there's no Use Tho there Truthfull it's something u have to Judge Mentally


sorry it's so short I might be off to jail for awhile
just wanted to drop
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Re: Just In Case

Postby SajN » Dec 4th, '07, 18:24

Great drop Rain :y:

I like it, and the rhymes you used as well.
Always lot of multies on your drops lol :y: :y:
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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Re: Just In Case

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 7th, '07, 13:34

sick drop(as ususal) lol :p
amazing man, keep that shit up
peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Just In Case

Postby Purple23Haze » Dec 8th, '07, 01:13

Pretty dope scope this

Like an innocent lie I'm white is'nt apparent
Shit unlike rays of light I aint transparent
My intelligence is bright motivated by a carrot
Try to read my mind you can't I don't wear it
Your third eyes blind are you even coherent
I justify my rhymes with life experience
Life in it I'm like Jet Li's fearless
I treat it like my lst epic appearance
My evident variance is my genetic inheretance
Fuck that little miss prissy prarie pants
The voice in my head is arrogance
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Re: Just In Case

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 8th, '07, 03:19

there it went out tha window like chronic smoke
do I dare dispense as I skin foes and promise dope
just to put it out there I must move an douse cares
I crush noobs till tha south's scared
so fuck dudes who will only allow dares [theirs]
if I come through is ya house spared
lyrically one use is about share
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Re: Just In Case

Postby Tash8 » Dec 8th, '07, 04:56

man i'm liking your new style a bit more, it's more literall in the sense that it doesn't alway sjust rhyme unesessiraly, keep it up man!
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Re: Just In Case

Postby Purple23Haze » Dec 8th, '07, 09:06

[quote="Rain Matrix"]there it went out tha window like chronic smoke
New level to the indo we Toke!
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