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by **SajN** » Dec 7th, '07, 15:37

This is something I wrote today.
I didn't want to put so much job in it, because there is something else that I am working on.
This is just a little verse.

I'm tryin' to get away from all this stuff.
Can't take one more day, it's all enough.
Life is changing, it's all getting tough.
Let's go back, so I can show how it was (bloah)
Every move I make, follows with consequenses.
It's getting on my nerves, disturbing my senses.
Life feels like a curse, feels like detention.
People say I mention this to get some attention shit.
It's all piss, cus all I want is my dream to become real.
These assholes don't know what I feel.
I rap to get through this crap, but they say I suck.
I'll rather cut my nuts, than givin' everything up.

Feeds please ?

by **Rain Matrix** » Dec 7th, '07, 16:41

I like yur rhymes

but u should challenge yurself more

try some harder rhymes in every drop

but this was ok... keep practicing

by **SajN** » Dec 7th, '07, 16:55

Glad you like it

I try to challenge myself, but it's not always it goes well.

Thank you :worship:

by **Steve Spag** » Dec 7th, '07, 21:37

Pretty cool man. The flow was a little ruined with all the words in there, but there were some sick parts.

"Life feels like a curse, feels like detention.
People say I mention this to get some attention shit."

That part was fucking dope though, haha.

Keep it up bro :y:

by **Purple23Haze** » Dec 8th, '07, 01:07

Ahn okay! I read it alot to catch the flow but I could not find it so Ahn Just kidding but if you want your dreams just make records and sell them to people on the street! People will listen to them!

by **SajN** » Dec 8th, '07, 15:39

Steve S : Thanks bro. :worship:

Once again, I have a little problem with fitting the words in a sentence, but I am working on it :y:

Steve Spag wrote:"Life feels like a curse, feels like detention.
People say I mention this to get some attention shit."

Actually, I wrote this part right before I was publicing it.
I had written something else, but I didn't like it, so I wrote that instead before I clicked "Submit".

Purple23Haze : Thanks man :worship:

That might be my dream, but I wasn't actually basing it on myself when I wrote it lol .. I just wrote it...without thinking lol

Thanks

by **SajN** » Dec 9th, '07, 16:34

More feeds please ?

by **J Rmix** » Dec 10th, '07, 04:08

i liked the middle

good job

by **SajN** » Dec 10th, '07, 11:29

Thanks!

More please

by **Arabian Shady** » Dec 10th, '07, 17:21

Steve Spag wrote:
"Life feels like a curse, feels like detention.
People say I mention this to get some attention shit."

That part was fucking dope though, haha.

Keep it up bro

that was ma fav part 2 man, i liked this drop,it was lyrically betta than the others
keep writin,
peace

by **SajN** » Dec 10th, '07, 19:54

Thanks Arabian :y:

I appreciate that :flower:

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