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Sick 16.

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 8th, '07, 22:41

I wrote this a while ago and just reread it for the first time. I actually quite like it. It was written to a beat, so hopefully you'll get the flow for it.

The minute shit starts bubbling, I got it figured out//
I'm like the high school geek on these beats, I floss 'em out//
I'm always killin them hard, what did you expect?//
I got to rap just to live, I am rapping for a cheque//
I'm in debt, I am stressed, shit just ain't the best//
My life ain't easy anymore I think it's time to rest//
But wait, I got to get this shit off my chest//
Because if I do not, my anger will advance//
And I don't know what I would do, because I just might up and snap//
Both lyrically and physically, I'll stomp fucking ass//
Batch, oh my god, no that wasn't subliminal//
I am not just a criminal, I'm a twisted individual//
Dumb cunt, yeah, see what you did?//
You got me going crazy girl all over again//
And I'm not with a Red Ferrari, I travel better ways//
I'm the Lambo type of guy, motherfucker's getting paid//

Note: Red Ferrari means Jen Ferrari. If you've ever listened to my raps you'll know who I'm talking about, lol.

Leave some feedback please :)
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Re: Sick 16.

Postby Purple23Haze » Dec 9th, '07, 05:45

I thought it was tight its official I always like the rhymes of iminal subliminal criminal individual never miniscule or minimal! Nice, peace purp!
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Re: Sick 16.

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 9th, '07, 15:54

oh yeah this was good,

tha first line almost lost me

but no... keep going man
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Re: Sick 16.

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 9th, '07, 17:16

Thanks for the feedback guys, glad you like it.

Keep it coming everyone :)
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Re: Sick 16.

Postby J Rmix » Dec 10th, '07, 04:04

not bad at all nd ya i like that part im a twisted individual
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Re: Sick 16.

Postby SajN » Dec 10th, '07, 20:32

Really good bro :y:
Nice rhymes.

Keep it up man :y:
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Re: Sick 16.

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 12th, '07, 17:06

that was pretty kool man,
lyrically u've improven quite a lot,
keep it up buddy!
peace


could u review ma drop as well?? thnx!
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Sick 16.

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 12th, '07, 21:00

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it for real.

Anybody else got anything for this peice?
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