did i...

[Ka0t1c]

did i mean to - say those words
cuz they did seem to - make you hurt
now i just want to - fix whats wrong
so i have got to - get this song out...

at first i did not know - how bad that felt
when i cursed and said fuck you then left the house
yeah i turned to the Devil, what was it about
im not sure, really at all, it concerns me, i'll
get my herb from the bedroom n burn it well
cuz my nerves are not mellow, im disturbed as hell
we're both worried, we battle our schedules installed
things occuring, we handle immature like a child
instead of two adults, these burdens may hault
any personal refuge cuz early insults
which determines the next move, reversing itself
from a purpose to rescue, to a urgent result
to exterminate as soon every furniture's dealt
right into half to make a permanent weld
to a life in the past, moving further the spell
which was dying to cast, you have murdered somehow
by blindless, the cash drew your work, learn to sell
your mind or they'll catch you in the dirt where you dwell
you are spineless, i asked you if a virgin, you'd tell
i wasn't buying that mess thru the perfume i could smell
so i stand firm like a statue with the terms overwhelmed
confirming to settle, do you prefer this, farewell

I made this up... Relationship with a whore who i thought i took her virginity, im oblivious to her real job, cheating on me
at first feeling bad but now not so much, basically im apologizing for yelling but yet i still hate her for what she does behind my back and i could be mature and be a man confronting her...without yelling...right???

[Arabian Shady]

I thought that was pretty wiked man!
was well written. had a couple nice rhymes, i grasped the flow.
nice drop man!
peace

[Rain Matrix]

it should be title "have u"

as in have u ever dropped anything not worth checking out

it's all good by my count... nice rhyming man

peace

[Ka0t1c]

thank you, i really like this piece, i think i could make this into a song one day... i edited a few more times so it rhymes better at the end.