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*Lights Up a Blunt*...Nuttin But *LightWork*

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*Lights Up a Blunt*...Nuttin But *LightWork*

Postby J Roc » Dec 12th, '07, 02:41

Yall LOSIN TO ME In a GRUESOME DEFEAT..Imma Legend...i PROVED IM ELITE !!
WHO GRIP DA HEAT? I Spit-Cruel. So Fucka's Get's-"Schooled" Like U Got STUDENTS TO TEACH !!
Yall Fakin, None Of Yall MOVIN DA WEED. If Eights-Bust Yall "Ate-Up" Like Da FOOD IN YA TEETH !!
Im DEBATIN FUCKERS Dat If My Steal-Is-Heatin Its Time to "Kill-a-Season" N MAKE IT SUMMER !!
Whos Hard-Now? All My Parts-Shout Dat'll take Ya "Heart-Out" Like U DATE EACH OTHER !!
Im TESTIN U LOSERS. Once Da Heaters-Is-Done NoOne "Seein-Ya-Son" Like Ya STEP-KID IS NEWER !!
GUESSIN U NEW JERKS Aint-Hot?if Fours-Bust U Tore-Up N"Brains-Tought"Like LESSONS BY TUTORS
Whos Fake-Now? i Break-Clowns Wen i Bake-Rounds Datll "Take-Down" Like WRESTLIN MANUVERS !!
Fuckit....*Finishes Blunt*....Das Enough Practise Fa Now...


Juss Keepin Da Rust Off Wit Some LightWork...Anybody Wanna Answer My CallOut?? :zipped:
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Re: *Lights Up a Blunt*...Nuttin But *LightWork*

Postby soperman005 » Dec 12th, '07, 03:13

yo j roc sounds like u a hova groupie
your skills are vhs like an older movie
me, on the other hand, im a blue ray disc
and that aint sayin much cuz you aint shit
you composin ya rhymes but aint sayin a thing
prolly cuz you dont like pussy, ya you gay in the sheets
why the fuck you callin these dudes out online
you fucking faggot you couldnt even spew out a rhyme
punk ass bitch you aint really bringin da heat
only thing you bringing is my belief that you weak
and you dont burn nothin but that shakey chron
you couldnt take me on even if you banged my mom
me i stay high, and i keep a bag of those purps
what you know bout that, nothin! you a fag in the works
trshady gone kick you out for disgracin this place
stop now you bitch cuz you just makin mistakes
ima rock ya' view cuz i aint tryna' talk to you
my rhyme are so dope they call me dr. seuss
so turn off your comp, you dont want to see this abuse
stop blowin and wipe ya' mouth of that penis juice
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Re: *Lights Up a Blunt*...Nuttin But *LightWork*

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 12th, '07, 17:03

haha, easy does it brothers,
i liked both drops but take shit like this in the rap battle section man,
thats y we have different places for creativity n battles.
peace

could ne of u check out ma drop n review on it? thnx!!
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: *Lights Up a Blunt*...Nuttin But *LightWork*

Postby J Roc » Dec 12th, '07, 20:36

Lol, It Was Actually Juss a Peice In CReative Writin...I Was Mentionin Tha Call Out I Made Before :sweating:

Ah Well...If Anyone Else Feeds....They Can Say Who They Liked More.... :y:
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Re: *Lights Up a Blunt*...Nuttin But *LightWork*

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 12th, '07, 21:00

good stuff go with it
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Re: *Lights Up a Blunt*...Nuttin But *LightWork*

Postby Steve Spag » Dec 12th, '07, 21:01

J roc wrote:Yall LOSIN TO ME In a GRUESOME DEFEAT..Imma Legend...i PROVED IM ELITE !!
WHO GRIP DA HEAT? I Spit-Cruel. So Fucka's Get's-"Schooled" Like U Got STUDENTS TO TEACH !!
Yall Fakin, None Of Yall MOVIN DA WEED. If Eights-Bust Yall "Ate-Up" Like Da FOOD IN YA TEETH !!
Im DEBATIN FUCKERS Dat If My Steal-Is-Heatin Its Time to "Kill-a-Season" N MAKE IT SUMMER !!
Whos Hard-Now? All My Parts-Shout Dat'll take Ya "Heart-Out" Like U DATE EACH OTHER !!
Im TESTIN U LOSERS. Once Da Heaters-Is-Done NoOne "Seein-Ya-Son" Like Ya STEP-KID IS NEWER !!
GUESSIN U NEW JERKS Aint-Hot?if Fours-Bust U Tore-Up N"Brains-Tought"Like LESSONS BY TUTORS
Whos Fake-Now? i Break-Clowns Wen i Bake-Rounds Datll "Take-Down" Like WRESTLIN MANUVERS !!
Fuckit....*Finishes Blunt*....Das Enough Practise Fa Now...


Juss Keepin Da Rust Off Wit Some LightWork...Anybody Wanna Answer My CallOut?? :zipped:


Dope peice man. Really sick shit in there. Keep it up :y:
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Re: *Lights Up a Blunt*...Nuttin But *LightWork*

Postby J Roc » Dec 12th, '07, 21:23

Thanks Guys...
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