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New 16 Barer Verse

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 13th, '07, 02:53

see, when im ripping the rythm that everybody give him
got spitting percision when im hitting ignition
sitting sipping with permission that i per missed, per say
see, coz hear say see's that hip hops getting more fucking cheesy than hairspray
so listen to the track while giving somehting back
this aint never gonni be wack now sit back

do you rap your tracks up and give them away
or do you rap a track n leave wrapped away,
so im rapping it now man what do ya say
coz i wrapped it up n left you astray,
my lyrical compound rebound on a track
i was pre-found at the back n re-bound to the front
he-found tha hunt-ing, is the best way to describe the game
it inscribe ya brain turn a sane man sane, i mean insane,
i mean in pain, infact its lame, on track they claim
they fame is there's, thinking they walked a mile, like the proclaimers
got this backwards like a throw flamer go claim-her but she claim me
so am claiming im the claimee, claming what, i dunno ya see


still rough around the edges, but feed anywae :y:

the first part is a little intro bit, the beat switched up a little after that so the flow changes (hence the space)
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Re: New 16 Barer Verse

Postby yoshi » Dec 13th, '07, 14:43

rofl i got lost in the last line :sweating: sick one btw.
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Re: New 16 Barer Verse

Postby SajN » Dec 13th, '07, 14:44

Nice one bar.. Nice rhymes :y:
Keep it up..

Feed mine aswell, "the future"
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Re: New 16 Barer Verse

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 14th, '07, 08:38

um...wow i didnt like it at all really, im not a fan of using the same word continuously in the verse. and it didnt flow for me well. it doesnt give me ne thing worth remembering...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: New 16 Barer Verse

Postby ek_iz_backk » Dec 14th, '07, 20:38

Kaotic wrote:um...wow i didnt like it at all really, im not a fan of using the same word continuously in the verse. and it didnt flow for me well. it doesnt give me ne thing worth remembering...

i agree with him
practice some more and youll get it
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Re: New 16 Barer Verse

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 14th, '07, 20:39

Kaotic wrote:um...wow i didnt like it at all really, im not a fan of using the same word continuously in the verse. and it didnt flow for me well. it doesnt give me ne thing worth remembering...



what you mean by the same word ?

the start were i use worplay with Rap/Wrap ?
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Re: New 16 Barer Verse

Postby ek_iz_backk » Dec 14th, '07, 20:46

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