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DA CYPHER

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DA CYPHER

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 11th, '07, 17:59

Am bak again!,c if u can de-cypher wat i'm tryin ta say, :p


This insulation kicks in when the darkness swirls,
incomprehension sets in wen ur loved one twirls,
An ethinic race or religion, a little boy or girl,
'Tis death that has started takin over this world,
A couple of steel birds was all it realy took,gave rise,
to hatred n lies, the ground underneath me shook,
A population was targeted,you could include their books,
Racist mentalities emerged,they were branded crooks,
The TOLL broke all records,like on a music chart,
leavin nuthin but prejudice n malice in our hearts,
comoflaged disses n attacks in the form of art,but
empty clips still hissin,souls n bodies gettin ripped apart,
So let me reak it down now, I dont reali want more,
The water's over ma head, I dont need an encore,
Every channel u change, Its another eyesore,
He thinks its a game, every death is a score.

i wanted to write on a topic like this since for ever but no time!!!stupid pharmacy! ;)
ne ways hit me with some reviews!!
peace :b:
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: DA CYPHER

Postby SajN » Dec 11th, '07, 18:10

Really good one mate :y:
You have nice multies and rhymes, and I caught the flow really well.
And I always like topics like that!
Good work :y:
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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Re: DA CYPHER

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 12th, '07, 16:47

haha, i'm glad u liked it! :b:
i have so much more material but i dont have enuf time to post it !.
ne ways thnx for chekin it out brother
peace


more feeds please!!!! :flower:
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: DA CYPHER

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 14th, '07, 19:11

come on ppl, 1 review aint enough :(
all i need is some creative criticism n i'll be happy wid it!
somebody hit me wid sumthing:sweating:
peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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