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Postby maximum69 » Dec 16th, '07, 01:41

yo i'm back i havent posted in a while cause i've been to busy having a life but hopefully i will have more time now that things have chilled out well here a song i just wrote check it out


Someday

Verse 1

Yo I hope that someday this girl will love me
Maybe someday this world will stop ing me
And maybe someday people will stop given up on me
Someday I pray this is not how thing are going to be
Someday I wont have to cut to feel better inside
Someday I will give up on thing and just try
Someday I’m going to find my porpuse in life
Someday I’m not going to want to commit suicide
Someday my parents will be proud of there son
Someday maybe this life will feel fair enough
Someday I’m not going to feel like im out of luck
Someday I’m not going to be down but up
Someday things wont be the way they are
Someday I wont waste time stareing at the stars
Someday I will get in one of those expensive cars
Yeah and someday its going to be cold on mars haha

Chorus

Someday yo someday someday one day
Someday yo one day she will really love me
Someday yo someday someday one day
Someday yo one day I will live my dreams

Verse 2

Someday things are really going to get better
Yo one day things cant stay this bad forever
Someday I’m actaully going to have shelby read that letter
Yo one day I’m going to figure out why I met her
Someday things are going to change from this
Someday I wont have to suck up and butt kiss
Someday I wont her my mom and dad yelling at me
Someday I wont be handing in homework done badly
Someday I will learn to stylish and ing classy
Someday I wont be giving my wrists a slashing
Someday I wont be angry and I will actaully be happy
Someday shit will get better and not be so crappy
Someday things wont be falling down and crashing
Someday people will be nice and not so nasty
Someday I will understand while all is happening
Yeah right and someday trailer parks wont be trashy

Chorus

Someday yo someday someday one day
Someday yo one day she will really love me
Someday yo someday someday one day
Someday yo one day I will live my dreams
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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