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extracting abstract (i can go deeper)

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 19th, '07, 01:39

most definitely
i stepped up a level
cuz im ready to be
the vet in the battle
between
Man and Machine
and God and the Devil
i bet you never have seen
depth more than me especial-
ly when you can't handle
stress mentally

i've been in this hell hole
forever it seems
and i continue my travel
will i ever get free
cuz a never ending same schedule's
tryna shatter my dreams
i pretend that's my shackles
on my hands and my feet

that helps me keep agile
for my window to leap
and adventure a channel
like my antenna does reach
extendin my fragile
vision's longevity
so no picture goes phantom

or rather say weak
the beginning like mammals
what i remember concrete
this planet's visual like actual
not a bit incomplete

the intent from this manual's
to hint you now read
what's considered as factual
not sit obsolete
each century's a chapter
i pick thru to teach
and assist you til after
the decision i capture
to end every piece
of history's matter
in an abyss, mystery
where darkness cannot breathe
exist's what i mean
yes i could go deep
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: extracting abstract (i can go deeper)

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 19th, '07, 20:00

mind boggling for some

but to me it's like a dope ninja star getting hurled at my mind

props :y:
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Re: extracting abstract (i can go deeper)

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 19th, '07, 20:58

thanx man, this is my craziest piece of work (abstract) i've ever done that makes sense
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: extracting abstract (i can go deeper)

Postby Enimee » Dec 20th, '07, 09:36

sick with an illness like a disease with no cure that junk was off the chain hook and wall for sure
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