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sing on (tell me what you think )

Postby maximum69 » Dec 17th, '07, 02:12

Sing On

Verse 1

We all have dreams and some sort of ambition
Maybe its to not be afraid of change and transiton
Maybe its just to see our dads but we cant visit
Whatever it is we used to write santa are dam wishes
Maybe we want to grow up and be somebody great
Or that girl wants someone to notice her lovely face
Or that guy wants god to show some ing grace
And then maybe god could just bless him one day
But weather it’s the new car or the secret crush
Maybe its just that a kid doesn’t want to get beaten up
Or the bully has been praying for a caring family
You may not think so but dreams can be fufilled they can be
Maybe right now we don’t understand and cant see
But we just got to follow ourselves and our dam dreams
So when you here the beat let yourself get lost into it
And follow what your heart tells you through music

And…

Chorus

Sing on
Don’t stop for anyone or anything
Sing on
When your down you still can sing
Sing on
No matter what don’t stop till you die
Sing on
And let the ing music fill your life

Verse 2

Whatever you have been through I’ve probably have to
I understand whats up if your mom and dad left you
I live with suicidal thoughts everyday of my existince
I have been hurt by my friends and decietful bitches
I hate taking out the trash and doing the ing dishes
I don’t know what you aspire to but what I just wish is
That somebody listened to my thoughts about business
Like what I believe in or what my god dam vision is
And if they only gave a single about my story
Maybe then someone would have some respect for me
I’m not asking you to worship me or to ing adore me
I don’t want your money or any of the ing glory
Besides the lady who brought me here deserves all of it
Cause if it werent for her I would have died three months in
I believe in following yourself an letting go of what your taught
And chasing after what you want no matter the cost

So….

Chorus

Sing on
Don’t stop for anyone or anything
Sing on
When your down you still can sing
Sing on
No matter what don’t stop till you die
Sing on
And let the ing music fill your life

Verse 3

Music saved me when I was at the end of my rope
It gave me the desire to go on and helped me find hope
And it also gave me enough energy so I can cope
Plus inspired me to write everything I’ve wrote
I wish I could somehow repay music for what its done
Because I think of its blessing evertime a new song is sung
If it werent for music I would have killed this kunt
I probably would have commited homicide or some shit cause
I had nothing to turn to no friends or people to trust
And when sam left me I ing loved her to much
I popped pills and then almost choked to death when I threw up
Music was the only ing thing not saying you suck
So if my poetry pays back just a little bit of my debt
Then it will be the most important of all my lifes success
Someday maybe people will be inspired by the things I’ve said
And I will simply be remembered after I’m dead


Chorus

Sing on
Don’t stop for anyone or anything
Sing on
When your down you still can sing
Sing on
No matter what don’t stop till you die
Sing on
And let the ing music fill your life
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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Re: sing on (tell me what you think )

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 18th, '07, 16:44

an interesting very well done piece

type on
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Re: sing on (tell me what you think )

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 19th, '07, 01:50

hell yeah, rock on! :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: sing on (tell me what you think )

Postby Wallace » Dec 20th, '07, 23:41

Another good drop.. you should record :y:
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