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My FeeLiNgZ R THiS (pretty hot)

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My FeeLiNgZ R THiS (pretty hot)

Postby sicilyzbest » Dec 23rd, '07, 01:44

the water ripples, call it your life
till the end, till you take flight
til you flip doin 95 on the pike
dying on the floor from the blade of a knife
rise sunlight, it could say goodnight
all we gotta do is live everyday right
its time to get swiped of the pain and the fright
its ya lucky day, you aint afriad of the height
when the trees sway like in the breeze of the night
my knees get tight and i freeze at the sight
life is life, and if you live it your chillin
the blocks crumble down like the bricks on a buildin
i am what you isnt, you are what im not
and if my blood spill i'll grip every drop
i dont care if its nice, in the rain, or the dark
cuz the light'll come faster, than my frame in the chalk
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Re: My FeeLiNgZ R THiS (pretty hot)

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 23rd, '07, 17:08

real good drop

good to see u around on this site

hope u stick around man

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Re: My FeeLiNgZ R THiS (pretty hot)

Postby patwivo » Dec 27th, '07, 08:32

that shit's pretty dope
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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