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Pshh!

Postby J Roc » Dec 24th, '07, 07:51

My Loose-Straps Are TECHS AN EIGHTS Dat'll Shoot-At Ya NECK AN WAIST So LET EM' BAKE
You Fakes-Are-Dumber. Ill Bake-You-Fuckers Just "Take-A-Number" Like SETTING DATES !!
I Got Tha Highest-Ocks Like-Tha-Roc's SPREADING BASE...N "Slicin-Tops" Like WEDDING CAKES !!
Wit Tha Nicest-"Cock" But No, Not Tha PETTING PLACE !! BLARE HEATERS To TEAR SKEETS, SIR !
So Spit-Bold N Get-"Pulled" Like HAIR TWEESERS !!
Pump-Clips To Make Punks-"Split" Like CHEER-LEADERS !!
An Yah Know My Pairs-Are-Pumpin To "Wear-Ya-Stomach" Like BEER T-SHIRTS !!

Last Line's Referrin To "6-Pack"...Which Is Musclez An Beer...So Thinka Bout That...

Justa Quick Drop...
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Re: Pshh!

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 24th, '07, 21:58

good drop

yur getting better

nice punchlines
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