No Breaks

[Rain Matrix]

I don't know how u'll Take This life is what u Make It
isn't that still tha Basics minds shouldn't be Wasted

fuck their views of Fakeness it only works where They Live
I can't record so I'll Wait Hid letting um in tha Matrix

most of our leaders are Evasive not knowing what Hate Is
stoned everyday so I'm Faded I know I'm not tha Greatist

but if being real is conTagious then I definitly Stay Sick
not afraid to take Ten Paces I eat beef like a Steak Kid

it's warfare stick to tha Basis throw punches like a Stray Fist
I'm talking weed when I Say Hits yeah son I spend tha Day Lit

I'm still on Course in new York I'm never Off Axis
in my Madness yur not Baggage yur a Lost Package

politicians Rob Status fuck their dirty Job Tactics
it's not an Odd Practice how come they never Saw Taxes

they have left tha Past A Blurr think of problems and a Mass Occur
as for me I know I Have Tha Words this drop is only one Massacre

[Hadez]

its dope man, good job.

i like the rhyme scheme, it really helped make it more than just rhymin words.
the flow is dope too. i dont think you lost it at any point.

over all good drop.

[Tash8]

^ like he said about your rhymes schemes, but sometimes ur internal rhymes take away from the main rhyme... like

but if being real is conTagious then I definitly Stay Sick
not afraid to take Ten Paces I eat beef like a Steak Kid

those rhymes got me off the flow

[SajN]

Decent man
I like your rhymes, and the flow worked perfectly for me.
Keep it up.

[Arabian Shady]

wik wik wiked
dope shit, no doubt
flow was perfect
meningfull shit, not just a silly rant
gd 1:y:
peace

[Rain Matrix]

thanks guys I'm looking into getting a mic seriously

I try to speak up on issues that get swept under tha rug and still keep my raps personal

it's not always easy but I do it for trshady

thanx again