Struggles

[Tash8]

a 5 min practice

at times we might think that we understand the struggles of life
but if you look back, you can't compare to others who've died
to sacrifice, that life, which facts prove, to bring a bad mood
to not only who live it but to who hear about it, the news
and you doubt if it's true, and its psychs you
making the mind wanders, and ponders what'd you might do,
had it been you?

it's a fast flow

[SajN]

I caught the flow
A nice drop. You used your rhymes well.
And I think you should write more to it.
Keep It Up


Feed mine aswell, The Future.

[Arabian Shady]

aweosme drop dude
wiked shit
peace

[Hadez]

its nice. its got meaning behind it, that's good. its different from the usual "let's try to put as many rhyming words as we can in the lines and hope it makes sense" mentality you see around here, so another plus . one thing tho is i'd change crap mood to bad mood cuz, me personally, i think crap mood sounds kinda stupid .

other than the little thing i mentioned its nice. propz

[Tash8]

its nice. its got meaning behind it, that's good. its different from the usual "let's try to put as many rhyming words as we can in the lines and hope it makes sense" mentality you see around here, so another plus . one thing tho is i'd change crap mood to bad mood cuz, me personally, i think crap mood sounds kinda stupid .

other than the little thing i mentioned its nice. propz

thanks guys

and your right, it sounds messed up so i fixed it.