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A lil sum sum...

Postby Jay-19 » Jan 12th, '08, 16:36

I always "rushin'" into shit, so they think that I'm from Moscow
Been in the game for years now, but I've never ever lost though
I tend to fuck up so often, I usually go by the name "Messiah"
If I only found some other interest to love with the same desire
I always thinking about lyrics to put down on a piece of paper
Just want to be respected and not fall victim for sleazy haters
My microphone is my Desert Eagle, and I just cock, lock and load
And some say that I spit fire, so you better stop, drop and roll
Someone is a something until somebody says he's a nothing
I just block out the outer world with weed I sit there puffing

Just some shit I though I'd post...
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Re: A lil sum sum...

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 12th, '08, 16:42

was impressive,
thats was pretty well, nice flow,gd lyrics

my fave line tho

Someone is a something until somebody says he's a nothing


so freakkin tru

gd drop :y:
peace

can u feed mine 2 please,its called "half mast"
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: A lil sum sum...

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 12th, '08, 17:36

good drop

and thank u as u have motivated me to

write as well
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Re: A lil sum sum...

Postby Jay-19 » Jan 13th, '08, 20:15

Thanks guys! :8)
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Re: A lil sum sum...

Postby SajN » Jan 14th, '08, 14:45

Great drop man :y:
I really like this line (don't know why tho :p ):

"I always thinking about lyrics to put down on a piece of paper
Just want to be respected and not fall victim for sleazy haters"

Keep It Up
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Re: A lil sum sum...

Postby Jay-19 » Jan 14th, '08, 15:23

Thank you NoN-Stop! :smoking:
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