bah im goin soft....heres a love poem leave feed plz

[Enimee]

Two such souls intertwined by fate...
i take your hand and you carress my face
we know this is more then a one night deal
because the love in our gaze is such as steal
more then sensual the word itself barely compares
to the feeling i get when u gently stroke my hair
i feel it on the surface and even more deep within
as i begin to get closer to that glow that i in-vision
when i see our hearts collide in a heap of gold love
my desire is emblazoned with this feeling, I've known none
who even stand close or hold a candle, a light of hope
cause when we touch every thing feels right, and slow
the love we share is only intensified by this mystery
who am i who are you and is this even meant to be?
i have only one word to answer that 4 letters same as first
f. a. t .e

[Arabian Shady]

its deep,n has real wiked meaning
the flow was pretty strong but i think it fizzled twards the end cause i coudnt reali grasp how to say it out loud,
all in all pretty solid
peace

[Enimee]

wow fuckin 791 views and only one feed?! now thats some silly shit
FEEDBACK YOU ASSHOLES

[Arabian Shady]

holly shit!!
i just noticed,
lemme guide u ppl, u roll ur mouse over to the "POST REPLY" button n click
type ur comments n get on wid life
go on , give it a try
peace

[Rain Matrix]

well it's kind of soap operaish

but I'm sure it has a lot of meaning to u or else it wouldn't have been posted

so keep that level of emotion in yur rap

[Xplode]

tat was cooool love feed keep it up

[Ka0t1c]

i like this b/c it has depth, emotion i can picture this and its so soft, but needs smoothing out a lil bit

this part made me lose interst:

who even stand close or hold a candle, a light of hope
cause when we touch every thing feels right, and slow
the love we share is only intensified by this mystery
who am i who are you and is this even meant to be?
i have only one word to answer that 4 letters same as first
f. a. t .e