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Lyrically Inclined

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Lyrically Inclined

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 16th, '08, 17:38

my mind just Drew Blanks I only have myself To Thank I can't Lounge Around
it keeps this Artist Busy when u Spar Wits With Me rap can Pound Ya Down

my window is Boarded Now but as for my shell I Tore It Down Adrenaline Starved
tha Next Reality has become my Speciality but It will leave ya Mental N Scarred

u look at tha sky Like It's Not Time day to day survival tha Fight Is Lost Time
propaganda Deals Cancer leaders have no Real Answers like a Psychic Hotline

as their message spreads I Manage Ta Rap if u strike first I'll Damage Ya Back
I don't choose to Brandish A Gat I got so many lines u might have a Panic Attack

I'm traveling hades river in a Row Boat so tell me what should I Hold Close
steady gripping my Souls Ropes while being haunted by some Old Ghosts

noobs don't waste time I'll Slay Yor Beef I keep it real and u Fake Poorly
people say it'll Take More Me but I've seen enough rain to Pray For Sleet

never was I Talking Me First I've been Dropping Eager tha others They Would Lie
I have no Options, Please Sir my hearts as cold as a Walk In Freezer Say Goodbye

for me Posting Hells A Favor cuz I'm going down faster then a Broken Elevator
it's Spoken Tell Tha Papers even a no name knows it won't Open Cells Up Later

depression takes more than a Bandaid good weed keeps this Man Straight
but still my Hands Shake cuz demons want my heartbeat flat as a Pancake

u just don't know so Test Friends if ya have beef more than Tools Wreck Him
I'm like tha Cool Weapon that tha Fools Mention what problems, I Supress Them



copyright- Chad Burke
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Re: Lyrically Inclined

Postby patwivo » Jan 16th, '08, 17:45

you copyrighted your lyrics :laughing:
anyways, this was pretty good you kind of remind me of mike shindoa(or whatever his last name is) from linkin park, regardless of what u think of him
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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Re: Lyrically Inclined

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 17th, '08, 12:57

depression takes more than a Bandaid good weed keeps this Man Straight
but still my Hands Shake cuz demons want my heartbeat flat as a Pancake


my favourite line :8)

tell me something, do u just write ur lines out or do u write lines 2 a beat, cause i dunno how on earth r u supposed to rap that.

but the this was dope man :y: ..... :b:
peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Lyrically Inclined

Postby Wallace » Jan 18th, '08, 01:13

lol copyright in internet age is a little hard now :D
The kyrics are very nice :y:
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Re: Lyrically Inclined

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 18th, '08, 03:16

I'm here to reply to yur replies
and at tha same time answer yur
burning questions

1. I rarely ever write with a beat
2. I can rap this with no problem
3. tha copy right thing was a joke
3.1 it was so people know my name
3.2 as it is synonomous with dope lyrics
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Re: Lyrically Inclined

Postby SajN » Jan 19th, '08, 21:46

All I can say is great job man :y:
You have some really good lines, and your rhymes are great as usual.. :y:
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