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Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 20th, '08, 14:12

ive worked for awhile to earn this NICE STUFF
and now its your turn to compile your LIFE UP
but first you should learn that the world's SOMETIMES TOUGH
so you got to have thirst in your journey or FIND LUCK

be "thorough n firm", "concerns will disturb" your "courage n nerves"
that could hurt i alert ya n try reversin your purpose
im certain you'll fight the person inside ya burstin
don't hide like a curtain what's worth the sight tho

i know you might decide desertion, alright but
should i remind ya you're searchin the wrong light
i heard ya mind's stuck in a tight spot
but surely your mic's hot

because you're a wordsmith which is kinda
your version of ridin a bike, huh?
go strike one verse in your journal n write
cuz it's still early in the night

the sun's not currently shinin
or do you really wanna fight
tell me what ya like
are ya "determined n psyched"?

nobody's the "perfectest type"
whether they're "purple or white"
plus i "heard you don't bite"
n when "occuring is hype"

youre "murderin by" "verbal punchlines"
leaving a "permanent vibe" any "tournament site"
really can see "you are that GUY"
who'll succeed n reach HIGH

for their dream to arrive
in the scene to survive
the defeat where the evil has eyes
on the streets

many have died
...they've been beatin but why
they believed in the lies
which eat em over time

dont people realise
our demon's in a disguise
to shield the healin from Jesus, our Christ
well isnt he just so nice
Heres a piece of my advice…
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: nice stuff

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 22nd, '08, 18:23

I was sorry to see this one end
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