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miss my friends a lot

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miss my friends a lot

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 20th, '08, 14:00

i miss my friends a LOT
it's been a long time since we've TALKED
and i wish this walk would STOP
i can't pretend
i wanna end my JOB
defendin our FOB
and get with the SQUAD
but until Bin Laden is GONE
i am just pinned on my COT
and im beginnin to ROT
from the sentence i've GOT
to spend at my SPOT
it's like a prison, im STUCK
on a mission which SUCKS
im at a position thats TOUGH
when i should OF
listened-good LUCK
to your visions-lift UP
from ambition, that COULD
prevent the CORRUPT
ion existin AMONGST US
don't give into these CHUMPS
where many turned MONSTERS
i'll finish my HUNT
to tend the business Bush LAUNCHED
they cant extend me that MUCH
any LONGER so give me a MONTH
then again i PROMISE i'll be within TOUCH
...Dear MOTHER, my HUGS n kisses go OUT...
know im livin where there's inches of MUD
and we're buildin some HUTS
now its winter, aint HOT
and I've witnessed gun SHOTS
hit near my BROTHERS-I THOUGHT
WHATS to fear, Im under COVERS n SUCH
but im brought to one NIGHTMARE
after ANOTHER-it's ROUGH
life's UNFAIR to new COMERS
and I'm COMPARED by a NUMBER
well i've had ENOUGH
...a COUPLE more YEARS and im DONE
with these CAMOUFLAGE COLORS
i'll be drinkin BEERS n puffin BUD
with my PEERS in the SUN
ima LOVE the FUN
for now tho ima carry ON
until my barrier's CLEAR in an area FROM
TERRORISTS PLUS various DRUGS...
am I runnin a MARATHON?
well here comes the BATON...
are ya NEAR me SON?
Be calm, from far beyond my spirit’s drawn to rid all bacterias
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: miss my friends a lot

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 22nd, '08, 18:25

flow was decent man... like always
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