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Clouds Over Tha Radio

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Clouds Over Tha Radio

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 22nd, '08, 18:35

I'll be here when tha Trouble Comes there will be no Struggle Son
let them Juggle Dumb spit it out tha pop charts are Bubble Gum

I am slim if yur talking Body Type distorting views like Foggy Night
who needs a fucking copyright this is me u don't have a Copy Right

we'll see who has tha Sickest Scam it probably won't be Gifted Man
thats like letting a Witness Stand what's hot not there Buisness Plan

no ones Rich Enough to Give It Up I expose this and my Skin Crawls Less
I hear Evil Lying like there not People Dying please don't Involve Death

as part of yur Gimmick all u fakes are Finished yur flames Extinguished
my stuffs off Limits I let them know tha truth so u can call me a Cynic

I let my mind Tell Me Things so yur forced to stomach me like a Belly Ring
boneless like Deli Wings yur not a "man of war" I don't think yur Jelly Stings

yur way Past Soft in all reality it's Raps Loss but u bitch's won't Back Off
u don't know what Skill Is I'm Still Swift but I'll do what u do and Act Lost
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Re: Clouds Over Tha Radio

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 22nd, '08, 21:42

as part of yur Gimmick all u fakes are Finished yur flames Extinguished
my stuffs off Limits I let them know tha truth so u can call me a Cynic


that is the dopest part on here :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Clouds Over Tha Radio

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 23rd, '08, 13:05

kick ass,
u might want to add a few commas here n there , it makes it so much more easier to read,it helps know where the sentence ends n the next one begins
dope
peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Clouds Over Tha Radio

Postby SajN » Jan 24th, '08, 12:19

It's a great drop.. Nice flow :y:
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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