A Thing

[Tash8]

we tried to keep our relations 'shady'
I felt like 'superman' saying 'hey lady'
I was crazy, 'crazy in love', I couldn't believe I was so dumb
with all this fucking waiting shit
cause you wasn't ready for a relationship
you made me wait and wait till my patience slipped
but I guess breaking is the fate we get
thankfully so cause you made me explode
your whining and bitchin' is getting old

I did this a while ago, but i like the wordplay

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its allright, id say its below your usual standard, but its still a nice peice, if you had kept the adding the track titles in it woulda been better i think, but it flowed kool n had nice rhymes

[SajN]

It's good. You had some nice rhymes.

'shady', 'superman', 'hey lady', 'crazy in love'.
These titles were nicely used, but I think you should have kept on adding more.
The flow worked cool.

[Tash8]

thanks guys, i dont like it. overall.. but i liked the wordplay