i dont give up writing...

[Ka0t1c]

before my expiration, from my explorations
my expectations are "for decorations" outta "war destinations"

cuz you gotta soar by "more escallation", so make some "core preperations"
or create "poured presperation"

dedicate "towards preservatin" your creations
expect no form of medication and explore yours

gain the strength to "bring restoration" in the "brain's imagination"
cuz stories should store, not start evaporatin

don't form animation, thats despiration, absorb a revelation
to record a presentation of education to those at registration

let em grow like transformation n expand the nation
plant foundations, the soul's canvas: paint on

don't dispose your crayon or ink, draw the man you're facin
because the Devil hates us, his name is Satan, lets close this case up

[Hadez]

really likin the rhymes in this. and you managed to rhyme the same sound throughout, which made it interesting. the message was quite nice too, kinda a feel good hype thing goin on. dont have anything negative to say, its a good read. propz

[Rain Matrix]

flow is straight up unforgiving

keep dropping

this was good as usual