man's creation (quickly typed up before work)

[Ka0t1c]

before my expiration, from my explorations
my expectations are for decorations outta war destinations

you gotta soar by escallation, make some more preperations
create less presperation n start preservatin yours
and expect no restoration to all dedication towards what's medication

cuz stories of imagination: well illustrated, will build up
hella guilt if you instill a build of unreal: man's creation

[Arabian Shady]

that was pretty kool man
i found a flow to it n it sounded pretty gd,multis were used to perfection
peace

P.S-i dunno if u have feeded mine but if havnt then could u do it?its called half mast

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

not bad man, you got to break your rhymes up, the string of big words aint good it looks complex but it isnt really, ts better to break up the bigger words sylyble by sylyble and rhyme them, apart form that solid peice man

[Tash8]

before my expiration, from my explorations
my expectations are for decorations outta war destinations

you gotta soar by escallation, make some more preperations
create less presperation

wow, great rhyming, u rhymed the same thing over and over "tion"

try to be a bit more creative

[Ka0t1c]

ok guys, i appreciate that, i won't let down one bit!