Halloween

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

this verse is recorded, but its a ft and will be released when the guy whos song it is decides to lol

we the dawn of the dead but we still dont die
so we spawning instead
take you to a silent hill and bury you a bed
thats your final destination, with a spinal seperation
you'll vanish like the ghost shit
i banish those who boast spit
from, dusk till down i bring my army of darkness
you cant harm me or mark this
im the lord of illusion, with my sword of ill fusions
this rap shit, is childs play, thats to put it in a mild way
you should just chuck it and exist this
coz i got more sick shit than fucking the exorcist
mate, no ones ready for this


just wondering what ya'll think

[Ka0t1c]

i think its tight but its even better when things are spelled correctly so we dont have to pause and decipher the word like "spawning" for instance. but that is a good verse with the movie titles.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i think its tight but its even better when things are spelled correctly so we dont have to pause and decipher the word like "spawning" for instance. but that is a good verse with the movie titles.

i only had 2 typo's i think *fixes them*


and thx man

[Xray]

dope verse man and it seems like your best lyrics come out when your talking about horror concepts *bumps zombie nation*

we the dawn of the dead but we still dont die
so we spawning instead
take you to a silent hill and bury you a bed
thats your final destination, with a spinal seperation
you'll vanish like the ghost shit
i banish those who boast spit
from, dusk till down i bring my army of darkness
you cant harm me or mark this
im the lord of illusion, with my sword of ill fusions

^^^straight fire can't wait for the audio

[SajN]

Really dope bars bar

"dusk till down i bring my army of darkness
you cant harm me or mark this"

Like this^

Keep it up man.

[Steve Spag]

Pretty sick man. Hard for me to get the flow for it, but I liked it.

"i'm the lord of illusion, with my sword of ill fusions"

I liked that line the best, pretty dope.

Could you feed my latest peices "Corruption & Control"?

[Rain Matrix]

good use of multi's

I enjoyed this

[patwivo]

i liked this a lot

[Arabian Shady]

dope flow,sick multis,wiked use of vocab,
all in all one of your best
no doubt abt that
peace

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

thanks ya'll

and yeh i seem to do good at this style...although it aint my style and id probly never go this way coz 80% of scottish rappers sound like this and well i aint tryna be just another one of them ya know

but thanks for the comments imma try something like this again but not with horror movies lol

and ill feed on everything people asked me to, probly tonight but if not tomorrow coz im off college then