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between real n pretend

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 29th, '08, 16:32

your poetic prosthetics ARE
pathetic cuz they're synthetic BARS

while at war, veteran SCARS get born
and they're worn forever

the HEART does store em
to never DEPART the battles i've mourned in

im gonna show you more cuz i treasure this ART
thats better than formin bs from a DART (bullshit tattoo)

my horrible life isnt normal
but it has got me FAR like a portal

to become a STAR, an immortal
i would never RESTART my level, before was all boredom
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: between real n pretend

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 29th, '08, 16:36

I liked tha flow

it brought me to another time and place
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Re: between real n pretend

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 29th, '08, 16:40

thanx man, i had a different idea for this piece but then i said "FUCK IT!" and just let it flow...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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