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Will We Proceed (Full Song)

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Will We Proceed (Full Song)

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 1st, '08, 07:21

if it's time for battle then fuck it I'm Going In
those that try to deceive us keep Pulling Strings
if no ones safe then it seems every Homes Equal
what kind of government would rob it's Own People
a lot of simplistic rhymes that really Isn't Art
soldiers keep dying for a war they Didn't Start
this stress is too much time to Find A Bowl
pack some weed and burn up tha Mind Control
it's about reality as long as This Ones At It
nothing is up to me everything's so Systematic
u can do as yur told or u can Trash Tha Choice
I liked democracy better when we Had A Voice

tha leaders need us to Help Them
so they can pay for tha Violence
revolution is at hand Tell Friends
if not we will pay for tha Silence

to stand out from tha rest First Ya End Yur Beef
write from tha heart and get a Burst Of Energy
all yur enemies will be Worked Ta Tender Meat
if there is no middle ground Word A Centerpiece
don't forget to stay real it Serves Tha Memories
most powerful politicians have their own Agendas
honestly do u really think they care how Ya End Up
time is of tha essence yet some people Waste Years
theres hungry dying kids that can only Taste Tears
u don't know who to trust so who do u Stay Near
no amount of plastic surgery can make u Face Fears
close yur eyes and imagine earth are u Safe Here

tha leaders need us to Help Them
so they can pay for tha Violence
revolution is at hand Tell Friends
if not we will pay for tha Silence

u can make smart decisions or just act Brainless
why get angry at yur life when u can Change It
promises scatter like people at a Bomb Threat
to tha ones that run things peace is a Concept
will they understand this message I Set Free
it's not like we can make proposals Directly
we are all royalty who wants our Kingdom Back
just when we start to see money In Comes Tax
now then let me summarize my final Bar In A Sentance
lets do like tha colonies and declare Our Independance

tha leaders need us to Help Them
so they can pay for tha Violence
revolution is at hand Tell Friends
if not we will pay for tha Silence
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Re: Will We Proceed (Full Song)

Postby Inzanity » Feb 1st, '08, 08:07

Wow that was really good. :worship: :worship: Politics is alway's a tough subject to touch on. And that was amazing. Especially these two line.


no amount of plastic surgery can make u Face Fears


lets do like tha colonies and declare Our Independance
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Re: Will We Proceed (Full Song)

Postby Arabian Shady » Feb 1st, '08, 13:19

awesome shit man!!!
reali reali good,meaningfull n well written
gd flow n structure a gd track
wat about the beat,have you given that a thought? :confusion:
how about postin some n maybe we can help you decide???
ne ways,congats on kickin it out of the park :y:
peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Will We Proceed (Full Song)

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 1st, '08, 21:38

that is pretty damn impressive, you keep me wantin to read more... excellent rap :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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