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Postby Erick » Nov 13th, '05, 03:59


It's sad and true but I have learned my lesson well,
comming here at TRShady thinkin' I'll give 'm hell !
But then usually got shot after shootin' my empty shell,
blowin' up myself like a desperate Taliban cell...

What was I thinking ?! It must be that ell...
Ah well...It could be anything who's to tell ?
Better only listen to rap instead of spreadin' my smell,
I'm outta here ! when I'm back I'll ring my bell !

Sweatin' and bleedin' to fill the TRShady Battle Rap,
thinkin' this is what it's for so I thought "Let's yap !",
but all I ever got was a lot of anger and critics crap,
I even woke up crying when takin' my beauty-nap !

And my depression has got a name, I have called it Henny,
cause that's what i'll be drinking cause I have many many penny,
till I go insane, just to forget this pain, memories I've got plenty,
wannabe-mc's ?! That's not why the devil's send me ?!

I'm an Eminem fan, I was put here just to be as I am,
like all you here, not a rapper, not even a high-hat on a jam !
Just here to fool around, have fun and if can, do a scam.
But Oh No ! I encountered the family of the rap son of Sam.

Everybody with their comments on my way of say,
some even became a new curse in my nightly pray !
Tellin' me to practice and come back another day ?!
When I'm gone, I'm gone, it's in my DNA...

And as I'm sure I wont be missed at all,
Like testcar dummy's before they hit the wall,
I'll just say goodbye and untill 'Curtain Call', see ya'all !

:wave:

I'll probably be back like my sig is sayin', just to feel the buzz,
but to leave with a bang I have something nice for you,
see this as a going away present to my fellow Eminem
fans...I hope ya'all like it (and haven't got it yet) !

Eminem . Open Mic . 4:02 . Infinite Album . mp3 . 4.6mb
ERICK 'Da LYRIC' - Amsterdam . Netherlands - http://www.linkage.nl
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Postby SoniK » Nov 15th, '05, 00:13

rap in peace
R.i.p big proof

what now??
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Postby $0 R3@L » Nov 15th, '05, 00:18

that was actually your first rap that didnt suck! :smoking:

peace dude and thx for the upload

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