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The King of Rap.

Postby ilovemeghan » Feb 5th, '08, 16:11

Hey all, I'm Scott
I'm new here... nah i ent the king of rap... but gna start putting sum of my songs on here in hope i can get feedback and help to improve my skills =]
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Re: Scott. The King of Rap.

Postby 4D » Feb 5th, '08, 17:45

Lmao.

You name a title SCott. King Of Rap, and then follow it up with a song describing how horny you are. Why do you only write about feeling horny? Show some skills, write about your skills, prove you're the "king of rap". :y:
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Re: Scott. The King of Rap.

Postby SajN » Feb 5th, '08, 18:08

It seems like this is made like Eminem's flow on One Shot 2 Shots. Because the first line reminds of that. And some other lines too.
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Re: Scott. The King of Rap.

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 6th, '08, 00:16

this is wack beyond all belief

u are tha king... tha king of wack

this is a cross between avril lavignes "hot"

and some kind of erotica involving an unmentioned partner

all in all... wack az fuck

not to mention u posted it in tha wrong section
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Re: Scott. The King of Rap.

Postby C-Game » Feb 6th, '08, 15:14

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Re: Scott. The King of Rap.

Postby Xray » Feb 6th, '08, 15:47

horny mafucker :laughing: but good shit man i thought it was cool :y:
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