8 bars, not finished yet.

[Steve Spag]

Well just sat here and wrote some shit. Check it out and let me know what you think. It wasn't written to a beat, but there is a certain flow that I have for it, and hopefully you can figure it out. Let me know what you think, please.

if i didn't have my music, for sure i'd be broken//
i'd be chokin' in ropes having a stroke, provokin'//
all these folks who joke about my spoken notes//
and get mad 'cause i'm tokin' a roach with coke//
get the fuck out of my way, i can cure myself//
with this help that's pure, i'm sure you fucking doubt//
what i'm about, it's true, but the hurt i've felt//
so alert my dealer, i need percs to dwell//

Leave feedback please

[Ka0t1c]

it's pretty decent, lot of rhyming but it's negative at the same time so its shifty

[SajN]

Great drop. You used good rhymes and I got the flow.
It's one of your best maybe, but it's short. Want to see more.
Keep It Up

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed guys, I appreciate it. If I have time today I'll try and finish it up and see what I can do with it.

Anyone else got feed?

[Rain Matrix]

I hope u go into more deatil about tha perc's

this did have a ceartain flow to it

[Xplode]

nice rhymes flow

[Steve Spag]

I hope u go into more deatil about tha perc's

What you mean? lol.