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[Makaveli525]

I made the beat myself, and I use a $10 mic, so the sound is pretty weak... I admit it is wack, I'm just looking for tips on what I can improve on, if any of yall seasoned rappers on here can give me some direction....
http://www.zshare.net/audio/732591483c9bb4/

[Tash8]

the beat itself i wasn't really feeling

the microphone quality can be fixed, i think...

flow need improvement, but that's not ur main problem. ur delievery is horrible, where's the emotion???

the hook i'm not feeling at all..

lyrics are fine, work on the delievery.

and mixing was bad, so i would talk to some better mixers here to mix it and master it for u

[Makaveli525]

the beat itself i wasn't really feeling

the microphone quality can be fixed, i think...

flow need improvement, but that's not ur main problem. ur delievery is horrible, where's the emotion???

the hook i'm not feeling at all..

lyrics are fine, work on the delievery.

and mixing was bad, so i would talk to some better mixers here to mix it and master it for u

first off thanks for the feed...
the mic quality is horrible, i understand that... once i start making tracks i'm pround of i'll invest in a better mic
my delivery & emotion is definitely my main problem, i see that... i try, but i always manage to sound dead when i rap... thats something I'm gonna continue to work on
the hook, i just kinda threw on there to fill up empty space in the beat... it doesnt flow well at all, though, i gotta work on those...
and I didnt even think about mixing... im completely new at this, I just kinda put the beat in audacity, recorded my shyt and exported it
so overall, i feel what you're sayin, thanks... I got a helluva lot to work on