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i can't avoid the pain that im going through

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i can't avoid the pain that im going through

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 8th, '08, 18:57

i can't avoid the pain that im going through
i'm Kevin McCoy and i'll explain my point to you

well things have changed which destroyed my youth
don't think im strange but that's so damn true

i became newly claimed to be trained in a Soldier's Suit
wearing worn out boots everyday on mountain terrain

it aint safe, i stay afraid, where's my aid, there's low pay
i found my horror route, but my faith won't fade

no more i'll do, that's a poor excuse in a war to use
my future's page is gray, a Beret n a torture tool's maintained

my Mom does pray that i make my way back into the USA
yes i'll bring her news, i remain brave but a slave lookin in black caves

but soon i'll say im AOK when i escape my doom by the end of April aimed before May

but now im insane in my brain because my patience decayed
...this is an update of my mindstate...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: i can't avoid the pain that im going through

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 9th, '08, 15:52

sounds like u have something to look forward to

best of luck

yur drops are nice
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Re: i can't avoid the pain that im going through

Postby Xplode » Feb 9th, '08, 16:23

gud work :flower:
So Long Bitch U Did Me So Wrong
I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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