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Enraged...hahaha, this is tight

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Enraged...hahaha, this is tight

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 9th, '08, 19:42

i am enraged, so let me out the cage
don't make the same mistake everyone else has made
cuz im gonna break these chains
then head straight towards the gate for escape
after i waste you to erase our case that we face

who's to blame bout my place of mindstate?
well i'd hate to chase you down like a race
but im taking back my tastes bud
and the town which you've changed
what now, i do claim blood
but not called from the gang

it's the stuff flowing thru your veins
you think you're tough but i know you aint
how much drugs does it take
to tell yourself you are fake
go to Hell, a realm where your fate
dwells to be quite frank...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Enraged...hahaha, this is tight

Postby SajN » Feb 9th, '08, 19:46

Nice drop man :y:
You had some great rhymes and the flow was there.

"it's the stuff flowing thru your veins
you think you're tough but i know you aint
how much drugs does it take
to tell yourself you are fake"

^I like these lines :y:


Keep it up.
Could you feed mines too.."The Future" and "3rd verse"
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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