*Lightwork* ... Can Yall Even Match This???

[J Roc]

QUIT ACTIN! Fore CLIPS BLAST AN Ya "Chest Exposed" Like Some CHICKS FLASHIN !
IT HAPPENS! J-Cock-Da-Nines An Leave Ya Face-"Modified" Like SICK GRAPHICS !!
All You PIFF ADDICTS TALKIN IT OUT. When Da HAWK TO YA MOUTH Youll Turn SOFT AS A COUCH !
So FUCK YOU SORE HATERS! Better-Love Cause U Never-"BUST" LIKE FORE-PLAYERS !!
J SHOOTIN DA SLUGS At-Tops. All U Wacks-Lost. An'll Only "Crack-Roc" DOIN THA DRUG !!
DUDE IS A THUG? U Clever-Nerds "Never-Learn" Like STUDENTS WIT DRUGS !!

....... *Lights Up a Blunt* ....... Haha Aiight Im Done

[liljon]

ha ha that was good but i would of said this...All You PIFF ADDICTS TALKIN IT OUT. When theres a fucking cock in YA MOUTH Youll Turn SOFT AS A COUCH) lmao hahahaha naw yours is better

[Ka0t1c]

that's a great improvement, still needs work tho, keep it up, thats the stuff i like to read in terms of rhyming style...

[J Roc]

Lol Thanks For Tha Feed Guys

[ichunez]

nice lines..buh u need lessons

pm me for tips

[J Roc]

Lol Nah .... Why Dont U Post "Tips" Here

[Arabian Shady]

THAT WAS SICK MAN,WELL WRITTEN
gd flow n rhymes,
peace

can you feed mine its called UNTITLED