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Random Ideas

Postby J Roc » Feb 18th, '08, 23:41

Haha Aiight .... I Got Ideas In My Head ..... So Instead Of Forgettin Them Imma Post Em Here

An'll Make U "Stick" Like A STAPLED PAGE !!
Blow-Tha-Pumps-An Youll "Hold-Ya-Stomach" Like ACHES AN PAINS !!


Juss Some Punches
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Re: Random Ideas

Postby Xray » Feb 18th, '08, 23:45

thas some strong punches, the flow is ther, the lyrics are beyong good, and keep it up you got skills :y:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Random Ideas

Postby J Roc » Feb 18th, '08, 23:49

Haha Thanks X .... Das Wha I Worked On This Time :D
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Re: Random Ideas

Postby mctworm » Feb 19th, '08, 02:08

nice rhymes, nice flow, pretty good ](*,)
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