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Shes Poisin

Postby JMG » Feb 20th, '08, 06:06

we had a better bond then a leperchaun and his gold
u left me stranded tho in panic mode like the titanic boat
now i stand alone tryin to slam and close the door for us
and force it shut gotta bored it up but lord its tough
to see the cord is cut cuz morning comes but the sun is gone
a storm erupts and rumbles dawn but i got to stumble on
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Re: Shes Poisin

Postby Hadez » Feb 20th, '08, 20:46

love the rhyme scheme :y:
didn't' take very long to adapt the flow. propz for this, plan on makin it into a full verse?
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Re: Shes Poisin

Postby JMG » Feb 20th, '08, 21:27

thanks, and I plan on making it a full song
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Postby *MIRANDA* » Feb 20th, '08, 21:30

luvved it , very good babe :flower:
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Re: Shes Poisin

Postby JMG » Feb 21st, '08, 03:23

thanks im glad u think so babe
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