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[Tash8]

with the birth of my name, i murked the game
fucker claim they rhymes are as sick as AIDS
of course they are,
cause in less decade they all be dead
i got an award for my rhymes being platinum
ripped the freckles off, lindsay's face and patent them
now the whole crowd of, groupies ask me if i can autograph them
yall who critize, let's see your mouth open
and lick my balls till you cheeks turn orange
and yall better be hopin, that I dont have syphallis [takes a piss]

ehh i think this aite but the only i like on it is

ripped the freckles off lindsay's face and patent them

[Xray]

good drop some nice lines

[SajN]

It's alright as you said. But not up to your standards.
The last lines.. nah, I didn't like them

Anyway, do better and keep it up

[Steve Spag]

Wasn't your best peice, but it was alright. Like Non-Stop, I wasn't really feelin' the ending of it. Some of it was kinda Eminemish in my opinion, but it was good. Keep it up

[Purple23Haze]

For reals want to tell you off with that wack ass comment you left me, but I haven't read all your shit, I just know this one, n I wouldn't even call it alright hell I wouldn't call it right. The only thing I liked is when with the flow as I read it was the orange and mouth open which was dope but you know what fuck you cause you don't know me

[Purple23Haze]

All the shit I got the other night from these dudes chet and your sayin the same thing it's not even about u so fuck you too

[Tash8]

For reals want to tell you off with that wack ass comment you left me, but I haven't read all your shit, I just know this one, n I wouldn't even call it alright hell I wouldn't call it right. The only thing I liked is when with the flow as I read it was the orange and mouth open which was dope but you know what fuck you cause you don't know me

i dont mind ur comments, i didn't like this either...
only thing i liked is like waht u siad

the fact that i rhymed orange mouth open...

[Purple23Haze]

Thats some fuckin crazy psychology but cool aighte then fine peace