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Blending In

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 1st, '08, 23:07

blending in is pretending and that's sending my friends to a bad ending
so since the beginning i've been lending em hints to contend against the trends
which keep bending to shift any sense for many pennies to spend
instead of wits building like guinea pigs still filling the pin

and it's killing good men from ink spilling out of the pen
well no doubt will again sink me down as does a bottle of gin
cuz now i am thinking, God, deal me a possible win
i'm surrounded by guilty, yet somehow we all sin

yeah, my boundaries seem filthy, i've encountered the grim
nothing's appealing, about every one of my limbs
really, my body gets slim
from ground to the ceiling i am falling within

call me just silly
but im not the clown to these kids
how can i get my talent revealing
before my balance beam slips

where's my power of healing
i have showered my gift
but only callouses lift from under my skin
which also is pealing

while i pull apart blueprint scripts
that tell my heart to equip
a common start i should pick
but im too smart to be tricked...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Blending In

Postby liljon » Mar 3rd, '08, 03:03

nice job
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Re: Blending In

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 3rd, '08, 07:44

thanx man, anyone else??? :confusion:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Blending In

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 13th, '08, 07:52

just want y'all to read this one as i'm reflecting on my past pieces
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Blending In

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 13th, '08, 10:17

it' sound good to me . rhymes were nice 2. flow was good .. overall it's good 7.5/10 .. keep it up bro .. :y:
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Re: Blending In

Postby mcZu » Dec 13th, '08, 18:35

Liked it, enjoyed reading it :y:
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Re: Blending In

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 13th, '08, 18:58

oh, btw, these are my old lyrics from awhile backl, i just wanted to let the "new" guys know that there's a way to check everyone's stuff from the past :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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