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Wordsmith

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 4th, '08, 23:55

I'm a word smith
My rhymes n words hit
Like nerves if all the sudden bird shits
Was murderous turds the size of purses
I be seemingly worthless on the surface
But underneath I be nourished
Unsure if my purpose is to be perfect
Since when I'm hurtin in sin n aint earnest
So service to the church is pertinent
But would it work shit I be nervous
Cause I aint brought nothing more to my words but less
N yes I been feelin the stress of the world on my chest
like military press I suggest sex with the sexiest,
It's effortless for many men no sense needin to believe it
I'm probably just conceded
I deem it necessary
to test the very, merriment
Of my inherited variant
Mishaps n embarrassment of arrogance
Life I cherish it...serious
I got the curiousest-jury just sit n refrain
Don't cast stones n I won't bitch n complain
I'm already inchin my way in to infidel lane
So Christ is the main n I'm sittin here prayin'
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Re: Wordsmith

Postby Xray » Mar 5th, '08, 01:17

good lyrics stay up :b:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Wordsmith

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 5th, '08, 14:53

yes I been feelin the stress of the world on my chest
like military press


that was the only part that i liked, other than that, i think it's horrible, it doesn't live up to my expectations of a Wordsmith...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Wordsmith

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 6th, '08, 01:00

So you want to see more metaphors and shit similies anecdotes well dude theres more to the world than comparing or making relations but why don't you show me what a wordsmith should be like, like maybe we should paint the world in your image instead of Gods right like where'd that come from left field holy shit YEA SHOW ME OR BLOW ME
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Re: Wordsmith

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 6th, '08, 04:11

You think you're tough as an Ox but you're soft because i could just squeeze ya
plus i'll stuff your crust in a box but im not talkin 'bout pizza (Tombstone)

well there's one

you got the wrong idea... i am about God, and also I am about using my heart when i write and it shows, i just believe that you're not even trying, to me it seems like you're just rhyming to rhyme and it looks to be terrible. and dont say show me or blow me. man up

i give you :n: for being a jackass
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Wordsmith

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 6th, '08, 04:26

Alright man I hear that but nobody wants to hear another sad sab ass story about how fucked my life is and when I do I can't orchestrate it ill enough to make an impact but if I didn't like it or put heart into it I wouldn't do the shit all the time

Here

I gotta tell ya I'm the type opf fella
that gets a belt of welts cause
The Devil wants to be me
and Gods angry cause he can't see me
Really though I reflect my whole, essence n being
on these two spiritual beings that tug a war on my soul it be seeming
See I had it ruff so I had to be tuff in the guff where I was stuffed
and a beautiful mind became corrupt
Fuck-in from doin mad drugs in broken home
Aint from the projects but I can hold my own!
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Re: Wordsmith

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 7th, '08, 17:46

Purple23Haze wrote:Here

I gotta tell ya I'm the type opf fella
that gets a belt of welts cause
The Devil wants to be me
and Gods angry cause he can't see me
Really though I reflect my whole, essence n being
on these two spiritual beings that tug a war on my soul it be seeming
See I had it ruff so I had to be tuff in the guff where I was stuffed
and a beautiful mind became corrupt
Fuck-in from doin mad drugs in broken home
Aint from the projects but I can hold my own!



sick :y:
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