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I'm Not A Super Hero

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I'm Not A Super Hero

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 6th, '08, 08:40

im not a super hero but sometimes i wish i were one
i'll recruit the rare tho with the rhymes of a lyrical drum
if they're no stupid scarecrow
the signs will clearly come from
their minds when shootin arrows
the kind that carry on strong
...not the firin of Cupid's weirdos
who don't like to bury their tongues
are in a line for future carols

hearin our songs is a sign we're near y'all
cuz musicians bond, my life is a peril (Danger)
this movement's begun
to provide a sterile, pollution be gone
new side, an era, produced thru the young
if you hide it's clear ya shouldn't belong
fightin the terror, assume i aint wrong
you're frightened by murals your rooms have now drawn
you're writing your farewell, the doom's in your palm...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: I'm Not A Super Hero

Postby Xray » Mar 6th, '08, 09:28

your right your not a super here :p naa cool lyrics :)
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


New Track: The Nightmare
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Re: I'm Not A Super Hero

Postby Hadez » Mar 6th, '08, 12:03

the structure is a little wierd. but the concept is pretty original. good job :y:
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Re: I'm Not A Super Hero

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 6th, '08, 17:56

I liked tha rhymes I read yur drops a lot
so I didn't have a problem with structuring
keep up tha good work
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Re: I'm Not A Super Hero

Postby Epidemik » Mar 7th, '08, 11:47

Hadez wrote:the structure is a little wierd. but the concept is pretty original. good job :y:
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