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was bored so wrote this

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Mar 18th, '08, 20:13

I was bumping music when my blood started pumping with my heart thumping, had my mind and juices flowing so I just had to Jot down sumthing :p


Words Poured out me like sticky thick slime
i'm rusty luricating my tricky slick rhymes
makin' it a lyrical crime drizzling down rain
doing sizzling magic like that david blaine
pullin' a houdini tied in chains slicing like a blade
an eruptin' volcano with a homemade hand grenade
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Re: was bored so wrote this

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 18th, '08, 20:32

nice.. your first 2 lines were tite haha
jp it was good
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Re: was bored so wrote this

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 18th, '08, 22:35

yeah, the first 2 lines are pretty cool

the rest isn't good in my opinion
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: was bored so wrote this

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Mar 19th, '08, 05:20

thanx for the feed :y:
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Re: was bored so wrote this

Postby Xray » Mar 19th, '08, 10:00

man that shit was tight...never knew yu can write :o

*ghost write?*
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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: was bored so wrote this

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 19th, '08, 13:06

like i said...sick vocabulary :worship: flow is dope too
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Re: was bored so wrote this

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Mar 19th, '08, 19:46

i used to write before no one ghost writes my shit i do that on my own :smoking: and thanx for the feed :8)
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Re: was bored so wrote this

Postby Xray » Mar 19th, '08, 22:31

¤°~ Jose ~¤°© wrote:i used to write before no one ghost writes my shit i do that on my own :smoking: and thanx for the feed :8)

naa i was a compliment like you wanna ghost write for me? lol
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Re: was bored so wrote this

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Mar 20th, '08, 02:53

oh lol who knows :shifty: :p
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