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i told you

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 21st, '08, 18:00

i told you it aint hard to hold your own and take charge
but you chose to stay stoned, layin at home makin no large
changes so then maybe we'll start breakin apart
cuz you're fadin out far away, known as a stranger you are

today the star you play, tomorrow, could pay harm with pain
from karma's game, bringin drama came to heart in your aim
that target's a shame, i hate to argue but danger follows
creatin a hollow carvin, it craves to call you it's slave

which starves to remain powerin your veins
now your bars don't remain the same
im sorry it claimed you and a marshian became
our balance maintained to demolish all gains...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: i told you

Postby jigglinj » Mar 21st, '08, 19:11

nice alias, nice title and nice rhymes! :y: :y: :y:
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Re: i told you

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 21st, '08, 19:47

thanx! :happy:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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