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Dear nor Deer

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 28th, '08, 01:44

Read 8 combined with nine like girl, Girl

Deer in the head lights.............
is your run of the mill...............
average kill...............................
Hittin people.............................
getting stuck.............................
in the front of your grill...........
I run like a chill........................
you run like a girl.....................
(Switch up hit em) Girl.............
let your love run feral..............
I run it like God and the world
My tongues so thorough.........
And whirls like a tornado........
I look like swirls......................
n have minds twirl like a dreidel
you think its a fable....................
I'm well enabled ta rock your cradle
Putting baby moves on the table......
I'll impregnate you......................
n put baby food on the table........
I'm a man not your dear or deer......

Fuck you if you think it aint structured this is what I think
rhythym isn't mathematical precision
its flow and intuition
which is an absolute decision
if I studdered would you listen
Or go head on with nature in a full on collision
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Re: Dear nor Deer

Postby Emadyville » Mar 28th, '08, 02:08

Very interesting :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Dear nor Deer

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 28th, '08, 15:03

well this is creative writing...
and that was far from bad...
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Re: Dear nor Deer

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 28th, '08, 19:55

Thanx guys!
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Re: Dear nor Deer

Postby Jay-19 » Mar 31st, '08, 13:18

Yeah, I'm willing to agree that this is creative writing! :y:
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